I hate you
I hate you for every little fucking thing you’ve ever put me through
I hate you for your lies
I hate you for your phoniness
I hate you for being a master manipulator
I hate you for promising me the world and then dragging me to hell
I hate the way I let you make me cry
I hate the way I let myself believe and trust in you OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN.
I FUCKING TRUSTED YOU
I tried to save you
I gave you all my strength
All my time
ALL MY LOVE
I gave all of me to you and your pathetic junkie needs.
I tried I seriously tried.
I planned my life around visiting hours and hugs.
My fault,
I should’ve known better
I used to know better.
I fucked up along the way… Twice…
But I stopped I didn’t EVER do it again
I didn’t ever fuck up again
I was faithful, loyal, and honorable.
I was yours
YOU HAD MY HEART IN THE PALM OF YOUR HAND AND YOU FUCKING SMASHED IT
YOU SMASHED IT!
HOW THE FUCK COULD YOU DO THAT
HOW COULD YOU SWEAR ON ME
ON US
ON EVERYTHING
When you knew, you knew you’d do this to me over & over again
You bold faced lied to me.
I knew… I already knew, just like every other time you’ve done me dirty I knew.
I know it all before I know anything.
I solve the puzzle before any hint of what the pieces will look like.
I don’t know why I know you, but my guts do and they know when your lieing, and I’ll always find out.
Your eyes spill your lies they give you away.
I’ll always know…
I’m disgusted
What was your first feeling as you read this?
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So much emotion in this piece. I love it, Brea.
Something good came out of this situation. =]
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lol Yeah actually. it was liberating to throw it all don, no holding back. Thanks for reading me! I'm gunna catch up on your work tomorrow! My boss is out tomorrow! I hope all is well hun!
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ever thought of yoga? lol
this "vent" was quite breath taking! i really wanna say F##KING HELL!!
your emotions which you have portryed in it are soooo strong, its like you taste the bitter syliva as you spit out your words. im just glad im not on the receiving end of it! lol
bravo for expression!!
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This was a nice vent here. lol. I think you got everything out wonderfully... you should definately NOT supress your feelings... let them flow! You let them flow here! To make this a little more "poetic feeling" I would personally work on the line structure a little bit... like breaking the longer lines into two or even three lines, but that's just me and this is already great as it is
So you vent girl! LOL
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I don't.....
think that you should surpress your feelings. I think you should let them out for all to know. this was one good venting. now you should send this poem to the object of the hatred and let them know how disgusted you are with them and see if you can salvage anything from the experience.
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geeez Brea this is a mighty powerful vent indeed i had some feed back from my ex today which we have talked about and the vent sounds much like what she said to me only you do it way better and of course i know your story so i believe he deserves it where as i didnt but the timing was amazibgly spot on when you write i feel you and on this i can only say im a click away hun if you need ok but a cool fiesty poem anyway
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Hey Glenn,
Thanks for reading this. Funny isn't it, how sometimes two completely different people lives can be so entwined and almost the same, even if we are on two different sides of the Earth...
I don't think you deserve it from the soties you've told me. I'm sorry to hear you were delivered such nasty words today. What a shitty thing to do on her part. Atleast I write em' down and don't nessasarily deliver them, now should he so happen to stumble upon my writing, well thats his fault for goin' lookin' he knows I vent on here.
Thanks for the feedback on my piece. Im gunna go through yours either today or tonight & read up on yah, I havent done that in a while and I miss it.
cheers love
-brea
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