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suicide

i cut
because no one cares..

i drink
to ease the pain..

i cry 
because i am alone..

i speak
but no one listens..

i scream
but no one hears..

i write
to express my emotions...

i remember
the life i used to have..

i wish
my family would care..

i pray
but god doesn't listen..

i've decided
tonight is the night..

and

i'll die
knowing i was alone

October 15, 2009


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  • Suffer-in-silence
    November 22
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    great poem

  • The Devil18
    October 19

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    this is good work if u ever need to talk i am here to listen plz dont hurt urself i know u may think u r alone but ur not alone i feel the same way


  • nuj iyema
    October 18
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    all your poems were great

  • brokenwingsxx15
    October 16
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    i love this. i know exactly how you feel.


  • unbroken2 broken
    October 15
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    omfg i love that poem i've been down that raod and i've tried many many times i still do but my fav was well all of it


    • pieces.of.me.
      October 16
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      ha thanks i'm goin thru atough time and this one doesa pretty good joob explaining it..

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