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Indelible

 

she‘s a township Black--

this girl that sings

 

straight-black her hairdo

crossing

eyes that smile

 

sharp, like crystal clear

her voice cuts water

 

shreds, sorrowed

by each slash

 

around my heart

tears form their glow

 

a sadness

wrenched, indelible

on my tender mind

 

 



 

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As I listened to a young girl sing (she comes from a disadvantaged South African community) and I prayed someone would hear her; enable her to realize her dream. No words I can write, can do her honour; knowing life's conditions she will continue to battle each day. Perhaps . . . just perhaps . . . her dream will come true.

 

 

 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 15

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    I would say, since she sings like such a beautiful bird, that her dreams have already come true...but yes, let's hope others may hear her, loud and clear...and perhaps lift her wings so she may soar even higher. Lovely penning, Frans.



    • FransB gold member
      October 15
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      What a lovely

      positive comment. Thank you. Blessing to you. Frans