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I need You

I look at you,
Hoping you'll see,
All of my pain,
And misery...

I'm hoping you'll look,
Deep in my eyes...
Then decide i'm telling,
Nothing but lies...

Because your my friend,
I just want you to promise
That you'll always be here,
When ever i need
A listening ear...

Because no matter what,
I need you...
a story so simple,
But so very true...

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  • Suffer-in-silence
    November 22
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    i agree you are very lucky to have a friend that will listen
    great poem
    -rose


  • nuj iyema
    October 18
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    your lucky you have a friend who listens.,
    not like me my friend is sick of me
    she's tired listening...