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Kingdom Above

I took all those pills,
and used my own knife
Now i'm slowly fading,
Becoming more numb,

Now dear God,
Please let me go,
So i can walk in your light,

For i hear its amazing!
A place of pure joy..

I want to meet grandma,
Give uncle a hug,
And live for eternity,
In your kingdom above...

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