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Master of Dark

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Concealed deep within the darkest night
is a tiny spark, awaiting light
to corrupt all hopes in anticipation
whist bringing forth annihilation.

To swim in oblivion, fill a black hole
pour onto paper the depth of his soul,
seeing all the visions and dreams
that tear reality apart at the seams.

He keeps his muse inexplicably chained
all so we can be entertained,
Master of Dark, with the devil he's one
ideas burn bright in the midnight sun.

As friends go he does excel
keeping all  bound with words from hell,
bursting through this self made blitz
is the one and only...our man fritz!




Author notes

Whoohoo two years! Ok I know my muse is still awol, but couldn't miss this! The BG and tag are yours also, made by me something to freshen up your page Enjoy!
Prompt: I kinda rolled them all up and went with the common denominator...you! I know it doesn't quite fit your prompts as such but I kept it under 50 lines

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Comments

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  • truelover
    October 22

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    nicely done, but so dark - good god
    a fine poem, regardless
    well done
    heh
    blitz/fritz
    nice...


  • WaterChild Reborn silver member
    October 19

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    Holy Halloween, Batman!

    This was fantastic! Any one of these elements could stand on its own, but poem, background and tag together create a resoundingly dark and dreadful wonder. (and a very fitting tribute ) Well done!


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    October 17

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    Awesome...

    Impressive work, I Love it...
    Flowing narrative that reflects me greatly with flawless rhyme & great imagery...
    And thank you so much for such a wonderful BG & pic...
    Thank you so much for entering & joining me in celebration of 2 years here...
    Well done!!!


    PS: Please don’t rate comment until after judging as I’d like the entries to remain anonymous...


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 16

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    My friend, my friend you are once again one of the best dark writer, i know now if only i can get my muse to come back, but i will say this i loved every bit of this poem, welcome back and please keep it flowing


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 16

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    Brilliant sis
    A wonderful poem for our brother Fritz..
    I know he will love it
    You have created something special here and told it how he is
    best wishes

    Julie x


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 15

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    HOLY MOLY!!!!!!!! This is soooo awesome hunny!!!!

    I love the way the name seems to be almost scratched into the background! The pics you've chosen are outstanding!! And the poem fits Fritz to a tee!

    WOWWWW.... couldn't get any better than this I think!!


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    October 15

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    Your poem fits the recipient well..I remember him from a few of my darkwrite challenges..

    Love the background as well..WICKED!

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • Jayde1
    October 15

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    wow wow wow

    what an awesome poem....
    this is well written....ive heard of you from my brother
    many times...he says you are not only a gifted poet but an artist too...
    this picture for the poem is outstanding...
    and suits MR skennick very well....as soon as i saw it i thought of all his things
    that have skulls and stuf on....
    well done and good luck in z contest

    Jayde


    • LadyDementia gold member
      October 15
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      Thanks I hope its all good you've heard He speaks highly of you to! I gather you also hold musical talents

      • Jayde1
        October 15
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        yeah I loves music and stuff

        I play many things....guitar is my favourite...

        the border to this poem is wicked....have you ever done album covers?....
        if not ya should...

        • LadyDementia gold member
          October 15
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          My lad plays guitar to He is a big music fan, I am big on ear plugs Still very much the novice with art, but hopefully getting there The artwork here is all by Anne Strokes, very talented lady with a love of darkness


  • Lily Wolf
    October 15

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    Ohwee that was killer dear
    Great one I think and
    I have that skull with the candles up in my room as poster

    Anyways really coll write
    Good luck at the con

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