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One Thing is Clear

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The rainbow may not always arch
in our direction but with Faith's breath

we can wish upon the stars

within words spoken, touch given
also actions taken...

Imagine an entourage of energy behind
and in front that can see through your skin,
into the core your very existence
unimaginable sights are seen
through opened eyes even
when color not noticed
for everybody can ‘experience’
when mind decides to dream.

An honor I felt to feel your excitement of Life
within an already opened door
and the warmest Welcome sign
you hung with a golden nail;
hammer received from Higher Powers

Whatever happens, whatever tries to block your path~
I admire you, see you make a road for Seekers to walk;
Imagine possibilities,  Angels watch from above.

This one thing is clear...

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Used this title:
2. One Thing is Clear

to honor Desire http://allpoetry.com/Desire on the day of her birth


Happy Birthday, Des!!!!
I couldn't think of a proper way to honor you on your special day so I took your own words and used them to HONOR YOU!!!

Poems "borrowed":
~Angelic Arch~ http://allpoetry.com/poem/3755504
-The Beginning- http://allpoetry.com/poem/3637722
*~A New Dawn~* http://allpoetry.com/poem/3584736
*~ You Soar with Wings of Every Color *~ http://allpoetry.com/poem/3522474
- desire - http://allpoetry.com/poem/3311818
-Desire Fire- (Acrostic) http://allpoetry.com/poem/3186770

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  • FearedCries
    October 30

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    That is such a great idea to honor your friend by creating a poem like this. This is an extremely beautiful poem filled with great words and emotion. Good write and good idea.


  • Unbreakable3
    October 22

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    this is nice. I really liked the beggining it was i think the strongest part of this piece. but thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest! <3


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 16

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    I am speechless
    No words can possible describe just how amazing this piece is
    A beautiful dedication for such a sweet soul
    I am so glad I saw this because
    I did not know it was Desire's Birthday
    I shall have to visit her page now
    You are a sweet angel
    Wish you the very best of luck in the contest
    Much love my friend

    David


  • ZachP gold member
    October 15

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    wow . . . this is so very beautiful
    and from the first line to the last,
    you've struck my heart on this difficult day.

    thank you for sharing, and I wish you all the best,

    zach estel.


  • bellagio girl
    October 15

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    Wonderful

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. The words are beautiful and the sentiments terrific. I particularly loved
    "into the core your very existence
    unimaginable sights are seen
    through opened eyes"
    A wonderful poem to be savored again, methinks.


  • Desire gold member
    October 15

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    Bless Your Heart!!!!!

    OMG!!! You know how to get the tears flowing
    HOLY MOLY!!!!! You are such a Gem and Gosh I have
    been praying to make it to this day, even counted
    up to Midnight~
    and I'm trying to type here but sucking chickens
    because my fingers are going all over the place
    Fingers Gone Wild....
    This is a Masterpiece and Bless Your Heart for
    taking what I had written creating this verse~
    Sounds better than my pieces
    Teach me how to write..and when are Your classes
    now
    I am so Honored for I elated You liked my work
    Okies how much me gotta pay ya Sista
    You are one of the Special Gems who Love me for me~

    And I don't have to bribe You to read me
    I'm being Goofy
    This is a Treat!!! I Love it and YOUUUUUUU
    Keep that quill shaking~
    Woooooooo Hooooooooooooooo
    Many Blessings in this contest Sweet One
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent-Your Voice and me...
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • John Faulkner gold member
    October 15

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    You bring such depth and emotion to this poem..I can feel it..You did a wonderful job with this..I enjoyed it..congrats


    John


  • Graciee
    October 15
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    Woooaaahhhhh. Thats reaally good, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!


  • LionessK
    October 15

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    This just may be... maybe, the best poem I have ever read from you. Which is saying very much indeed.
    Beautiful, Sandy. Truly.

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