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would you.

my heart is racing
my breath is slow
im choking out words
you'll never know
im desperatly trying
finding a way
but something keeps me
from believing it's okay

so,
would you hold my hand
if i told you i couldnt
stand up on my own
would you help me fight
if i told you i couldnt
do this alone

cause' im so in love with you,
its unreal
im at a loss for words
i don't know how i feel
every moment im not with you
feels like a moment i cant survive
but when you come around
you bring me back to life

so,
would you hold my hand
if i told you i couldnt
stand up on my own
would you help me fight
if i told you i couldnt
do this alone

and now im drawing  little heart shapes
and in the center is your name
but to be honest with you,
baby im afraid.

so tell me,
would you hold my hand
if i told you i couldnt
stand up on my own
would you help me fight
if i told you i couldnt
do this alone

oh, oh, oh, oohh,
would you hold my hand
if i told you i couldn't
stand up on my own
would you help me fight
if i told you i couldnt
do this alone

i can't do this alone.
i cant do this alone.

Author notes

eh, i haven't wrote lyrics in forever and i've only ever wrote them like three times. so don't be too mean. =p but my girlfriend wrote, sung, and played a song for me and then this just came out. of course shes way more talented so hers was better and she can actually play and sing, i cant just write, ha.

you can always give me ways to improve though.

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