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Death Note

so much passion
something so wrong
so dangerous
and with this
as my sharp little friend
is kissing my skin so in other word's
this death note is written in blood
with each slice i write another line
my this dead like felling is so divine
well i'm sorry i must cut this short
now i'm light headed
breath is rough
and please don't worry
this is only the death note

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sorry guys just got back

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  • Wow, i think this was going to be something else, but this is just whoa, the feeling in this was strong then i thought it would be, am hoping it is just a poem for you, keep it flowing

  • man everything allright man whats going on?