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Goddess~




Here in the darkness, with the full moon
I call the darkness, five points in tune
I beckon directions, which four corners loom
And surrender my patience, the fifth sense coo
Come light and fire, earth and air
Come waves of silence and trickling dare
Come directions, of knowledge come hither forth
Give me the essence, come like a stork.
Shall the universe grant to me,
the true gift
of essential knowledge,I set adrift
Minding my actions, I send a mist
of empowered energy, my universal lift.
Acknowledging my shares of times and needs
bring to me, the serenity,
three times three
calling back
life's eternity-
I now move forward,
a blossoming tree.




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  • sgking123 gold member
    November 16
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    wow

    pue wisdom...of senses elements that make us..this was an adorable write about a godess that we hold so revered..loved this from start to end...fuess you should write asequel to this


  • cybilseyes silver member
    November 5
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    Wonderful piece! I love your imagery!


  • Myrtle Thomas
    October 18

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    Enchanting

    I liked this poem the way it flows to me is beautiful.I wouldn't change a thing , the words flow together as a tapestry


  • AmbiguousDesire
    October 15

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    love it. ithink you should keep it the way it is.
    p.s. love the pic