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Autumn.

Autumn;
Crisp leaves fall to the ground
As the wind blows with beauty through the yellowed trees.


They fall gracefully
Each one landing to the ground,
The breeze constantly changing the direction they head for.

Weather changing
From light to dark skies
Howling wind swoops amongst the branches bristling.

Orange blankets
Of mixed white clouds, heat the sky
Falling leaves act as decor as they crash and burn.

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  • Oh wow!!! Oh my goodness!! I love this. You did excellent with this. I love it from start to finish. It reminds me of Robert Frost. You did amazing with this write. Keep up the great writing!!


  • BadazzGangsta
    October 18

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    wow this peice iz very amazing, i love your mature choice of words....your very creative...i love it....btw autumn/fall iz my favorite season


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 17

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    I love it honey

    You have such a wonderful coloring book shown here and you can paint the lovliest pictures with you words indeed .Bravo


  • Valerien Raven
    October 16
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    A very beautiful piece. Keep up the good work ^^.


  • Naznomarn
    October 15
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    awww sweet

  • Eusebius
    October 15

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    Oh, a lovely and most wonderful autumn scene is presented here... very defly and well done! Oh, I loved it, loved it!


  • Karra-Mayy
    October 15

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    i really enjoyed reading this

    tho i did yarn at the end lol! not cause of this just cause im tied lol!!!! :L

    great poem

    best read myn biatch :L


  • ZachP gold member
    October 15

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    Dear poet:

    you've painted a beautiful blanket of autumn leaves here, my heart just jumped into your words. Your form here is absolutely beautiful and your language exquisite!

    I wish you the best of luck in the contest ahead,
    Zach Estel.

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