dEaR "fRiEnDs", dEaR tEaChErS, FaMiLy,
i aM dEaD nOw, cAn'T yOu SeE?
tHeRe'S jUsT oNe tHiNg i hAvE tO tElL:
tHaNkS tO yOu, mY LiFe wAs ... wElL...
nOt ReAlLy HaPpY, sO tO sPeAk;
PsYcHoLoGiStS' AdViCe i'D sEeK.
bUt tHeY cOuLd nEvEr hElP mE mUcH,
sO i DiD cUt mY wRiStS aNd SuCh.
i LoSt sOmE bLoOd bUt DiD nOt DiE,
wAs sTiLl aLiVe - tHaT mAdE mE CrY!
sO tHeN i tRiEd tO KiLl mYsElF
bY jUmPiNg FrOm mY sChOoL bOoK sHeLf.
iT DiD nOt wOrK - i WaS sTiLl hErE,
AlL aLoNe AnD fUlL oF fEaR.
wHaT wOuLd mY mOmMy SaY tO mE
aBoUt ThE BrUiSeS oN mY kNeE
fRoM fAlLiNg oFf tHe BoOkShElF HiGh?
i WaS aFrAiD - oH mY, oH mY!
i ToOk a KiTcHeN kNiFe tO eNd
My LiFe - bUt i DiD jUsT prEtEnD
bEcAuSe i DiDn'T wAnT tO rUiN
mY bRaNd NeW cLoThEs. iNsTeAd, wAs dOiN'
aLl oF YoU a HuGe, HuGe FaVoUr
By TrYiNg OuT sOmE ToXiC FlAvOuR...
Author notes
Pig Latin and "normal" English versions can be found here:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3570800
A contest entry
- wRiTe lIkE tHiS! by moaner.
625 points, ended October 29, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow. i can feel the messed up mind of a young girl the way this was written. this was great, thanks for entering xxx
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great job
this was such a cute way to put it. Its so dark and sad but to me it read like a nursery rhyme. very good it flowed really nicely, and rhymed really well.
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This is
a very good poem with a good flow to it. Could definitely feel the 'dark humour' within. Well rhymed too.
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bUt ItS sEw TrAgiC
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Thanks for the BIG SMILE you gave me...
I LOVE sticky caps and your poem is pure delight!
Humor, cleverness, and darling dialogue... makes my day! 
We should do MORE sticky caps to pass along some big smiles.
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