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dandelion

dandelion seeds
winds will spread you far and wide
yellow heads appear

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 2

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    excellent haiku;

    I'm so pleased to see a Haiku in this contest this is elegant for me, almost as though you were whispering it softly for the readers rather than just reading

    Stay safe
    Manda


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    November 2

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    Short but definately sweet, Just when you think it is all over they start again bringing joy once more to the eyes and spirit. It may be a secrete but I am somewhat partial to this form. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful poem.

    Brother Dennis


  • raggyann
    October 24

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    i love them
    they say they are weeds
    but i think they are so pretty