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Cant get you out of my mind

I wake up
In the morning
Tears running down my face
I get up
I look in the mirror
Disguisted by the reflection
Disguisted by me
I punched the mirror
It broke into a million pieces
Some went into my hand
I started to bleed
The blood running down my hand
Like the tears running down my face
I wonder what made me cry
Why i hate myself so much
I realize
It was you
You made me cry
Once again
Thoughts of you
Run through my mind
Like a song
On repeat
We are over
And have been for months
But your still here
In my memories
I miss you
The memories run
Through my mind
As i fall to the floor
Bleeding and crying
I cant get you out of my head
You wont leave
I realize im in love with you
And will never get better
I will remember you
Forever and always
This will always happen
And nothing
In the world
Will take it away

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  • lilbabygurl88
    October 15
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    Heart Breaking

    Wow.. this really pulled at me. To love and have lost is the one of the worst pains to have.

    ~D

  • luvhilton
    October 15
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    amazing.