Im standing in a room
Screaming
Can anyone hear me
Im all alone
Everyone left me
Standing here
By myself
Does anyone feel my pain
When you walked away from me
You left me
Screaming for your name
This pain i hold within me
Can anyone feel it but me
Im invisable
No one cares
No one can see me
Im lost in this world
Where im all alone
Im stuck in this room
Im lost in this room
Is anyone going to come
And find me
Are they even going to try
Will they even open there eyes
To realize im gone
No one can find me
Not even me
This world
Is nothing like i thought it was
Theres pain
And hurt
And tears
Does anyone care
About the people who may be hurting
Do they even open up there eyes
To see whats happening
Im one of those people
Whos heart is broken
It got thrown at
An endless dark pit of nothing
Smashed into millions of pieces
And stomped on
Like a piece of trash
This room im screaming in
No ones in it
This world is a lie
We will all die
Some people will die
Sooner than others
And some are already did
Inside
I will be dead sooner
Than later
My poem i think its bad what do u think?
Comments
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i like it is cold an i really do love it
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This was a really good and poised piece. It was so relatable. for me. And Its fascinating how you put so much pain into words like this.....(that sometimes gets hard for me.) So Im looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Sometimes people don't always see what is right in front of them. It's hard for others to understand the pain or suffering that the people around them are going through and to attempt to help them. If you ever need to talk to someone..feel free to message me
I really liked this piece.. it's like your screaming out.
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