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I can hear you crying yourself to sleep
wishing the nightmare would just end
every time you're left on the floor
and all you want to do is scream for it to stop
but you hold your tongue and pretend that it's all right

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so I posted this before I finished it so I keep updating it with changes.

I'm really having trouble writing this poem, its going to be Three sections of five lines, and I'm having trouble moving on past this because I lose focus because every time I think about this poem it reminds me of someone and I don't like that with were this poem is going.

how can I finish it?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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