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Their Love ♥



Her smile was their first hello
His laugh was their hands entwined
Their awkwardness seemed to bloom
And their hearts became combined
Their eyes met staring into forever
His touch made her shiver and melt
The butterflies were dancing
Like nothing she'd ever felt
Their love soon turned to perfect
His glance still made her weak
They shared the best parts of everything
Their love was surely unique
Their secrets were kept safe
With surprises and with trust
In a warmth that only they would know
Beyond their world and laced with lust
He made her a promise one day
They were words he couldn't undo
He asked her hand in marriage
and her answer was " I Do"

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  • Babies6872
    October 16

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    This Was Real Pretty

    It's something that most women and some men can relate to. When you fall in Love and it leads to Marriage. Your romance feels alot like the things you mentioned. I can relate to those feelings even now after 4 yrs of Being With My Husband. Thank You I Enjoyed This Very Much

  • this was BEAUTIFUL! the rhyme, the flow, everything was great. it just screams love at you. very stunning, left me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside.. really reminds me of him amazing write hun! i loved it!