Slouched in a windowsill
laughing.
Wind is like an escape..
my hand floats in it.
And I can breathe
because it's breathtaking.
But I can't talk about it now.
This is my moment,
one where it all blows away.
And I'm laughing with it.
I can't stop!
Because nothing is funny,
and it's hilarious.
I can't hear you.
I'm somewhere else..
taken away
to that nonexistent world.
That's more real than this.
I'm
Letting go.
So
I'm done talking.
Author notes
Hope you like it.
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Comments
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i'm not really sure what to say about this poem...it's just...it speaks to me so much. it's emotional without a definite emotion...I'm not sure if that makes any sense, but it's the best I could describe it! beautiful work
peace
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Thank you! I was going for something like that. :]
<3
Bullets
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excellent...this has an air of mystery that really adds to the overall feel of your write. I really enjoyed it very much! thank you for sharing it.
peace and light,
Kendal
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intresting. i get a hollow but deep feeling with this write. i think i like it in fact i know i like it lol. keep up the good work and well donex
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