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Listen Brother




listen brother! i love you from the depth of my soul,

i always wish that you achieve your goals,

listen brother! i am calling out to you,

without you my world becomes blue,



listen brother! be there to hold me,

because you r the only one whom eyes seek,

listen brother! i have saddness to share,

because you are the only one who cares,



listen brother! your sis is beside you,

i am your friend and it is certainly true,

listen brother! share your tension,

i'll  never get upset from your aggression,



look brother! don't be depressed,

i am sure everyone will be impressed,

dear brother! you will reach to the peak,

and then bad people will shut their beaks,

hey buddies plz point out the mistakes if any

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