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Earthly Plight

From some far off place the golden sun can be seen
rising amidst a troubling sky which casts a purple hue
where the crescent moon and Saturn rings can be seen
yet the distant speck reflects the light of our earthly plight
mirrored upon this unknown land might it be heaven sent.


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  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 26
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    very nicely done. i particularly like the expression of your closing line.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 22
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    when one writes this well, it needs to be recognized as so many others do...thank you for joining in
    Linda


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 15

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    This has got to be gold!

    your imagery merges so perfectly

    so easy to visualize

    so glad to read this

     beautiful

    love your ending

    God bless you my friend...