which is it
that feels
greater pain
a heart, brittle
fracturing each beat
or the lips of the smile
that stays on
through it all
projectile spewing thoughts
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much to ponder
they say the eyes are the gateway to the soul, but I feel the lips are the voice of the heart so smiling with a broken heart is like speaking without a pulse
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why
why do i get this on each return favor..lol....read it again...sooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooood -
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haha! i just thought you liked it....lol
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a heart, brittle
fraturing each beat,
pumping pain through my limbs untill the numbness overwhelms
makes it easier
for the lips of the smile
to hide it all.
i like the way you think and express yourself. i hope i didn't offend you with my free expression inspired by your verse.
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in light i'd say the
smile
suffers most
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last time i voted smile..and this time again...yeah...... -
the poor heart indeed! This was a lovely write! So deep in so few words, and personally I think those poems make the most impact!
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second visit
a heart, brittle
fracturing each beat....imagery possibly crafted only by your adept mind........... -
wow
projectile spewing thoughts,,,not just that it was an ICBM-a missile to core..........i guess you bring out the pain so very well..let emtell you it is smiles that always win! -
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thank you, j...your comments always always make me smile
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WOW this is an awesome write...really strong...yet beautiful...made my soul quiver a little
T
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Neither one of them, it's the heart of the one that causes the pain and knows it, that hurts the worst, for it was never intended at all... Scott
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