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A Little Taste of Freedom

Sweet milk on my lips.
The taste of jubilee.
Breathing ever so lightly.

The tears have long since dried up,
But i feel their shadows along my cheeks.
Breathing ever so deeply.

My eyes flutter open,
The burnt sky lingers in my bleary eyes.
Yawning...

I stretch; arching my back.
The sun blazes as I
Breathe deeper.

The air is crisp.
Sunshine warming my hair...
Shall i nap again?

I lay my head on the freshly cut grass.
Such beauty the world is
Under the blazing sun.

Perhaps a nap is in order...
after... all...

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Think of a cute little kitty basking in the sun... Constructive criticism is very much appreciated ^_^

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