when the world
seems to fall and fall,
to ensnare and encircle,
so that everything
you have ever done
is contained and quantified--
what do you do?
If it is beautiful.
you continue life--
as if it never happened
Author notes
Not sure how I feel about this one. I lost my first version, but this one is basically the same and sounds better anyway. I have not written a poem in a while.
A contest entry
- Your Own Expressive Take (short verse) by misticmoonlite.
700 points, ended October 23, 2009, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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well done, thank you for your well formed poem
entry to my contest
Linda
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when one feels this it does show power in the soul of ones poetry,
thank you for this entry
good luck
Linda
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