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Patterns

Outside forces,
They have shaped me
Now that I am stronger
I can change me

Patterns have shaped me
But I can change these
Wisdom and reasoning
Will create a better me

I'll move forward
Towards my dreams
I'll climb the mountain
Nothing will stop me

Patterns have shaped me
But I can change these
Wisdom and reasoning
Will create a better me

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 16

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    you know this is something amazing but then again so is the person who wrote it, all i have to say about this is that i agree with and love the poem, keep it flowing