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For my dear Lover

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I walk in the Shadow's to be seen out of site,
My life is not normal as you would think,
I love no other but the man that lives 100yrs ago,

My lover for life he will remain,
but i will remain
immortal.

Slowly comming in more deeply into
the towns filled with the murders.

They killed him...
how dare they.
now it is my turn,
ill kill them..

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Vampire story

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  • poisonivystar4
    November 16
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    Never piss off a woman. Good luck in the contest!


  • loveisntforme
    October 22
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    ............

    i love this poem.
    it shows how much you grieve for you baby!
    and i would do the same i'd find them and kill the fuck outta them!!!!!!!!!!!


  • katis-only-devil
    October 15

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    Bravo. This piece was magnificent. There is so much heart and love in it, and you caught the personification of a vampire right on the nose.

    My favorite part was:
    "They killed him...
    how dare they.
    now it is my turn,
    ill kill them.."

    Thanks for sharing this piece.

    -kyle