we skipped through another puddle
and hushed our laughter in this
unending storm
-cloudy
we fell through transparent rainbows
and learned love underneath the
Seattle sky
-with a chance
we tripped through colored downpours
and photographed memories from
last December
-of rain:
we saw through Hope's empty eyes
and stole more sunsets along the
Puget Sound
-drip, drip, drip.
Author notes
Prompt:
"If the sky were to suddenly open up, there would be no law, there would be no rule. There would only be you and your memories."
- Dr. Lilian Thurman
A contest entry
- Two Quotes; promts; whatever. by Naridill.
370 points, ended October 26, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Suggestions?
Comments
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Excellent
What a great write. So very creative. Congratulations on the silver -
Mellow. I like the soft feel within here. Beautiful.
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superb~ loved every line of this one...
how sweetly you lean into the poem and come out of it with a simmer of love and remembered tomorrows
mal
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Excellent
What a terrific write. So very perfect for the prompts. best of luck in the contest
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What a wonderful take on the prompt!!
"we saw through Hope's empty eyes
and stole more sunsets along the
Puget Sound "
Nicely penned as always buddy.
All the best.
Ken
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This is brilliant. I loved it sis!
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Oh dear...You have zeroed in on sights and sounds of near me...Puget sound, Seattle...Dear places to my memory....Love your title, and the imagery painted through this piece.....
Mom Good luck in the contest, luv!
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Softly beautiful!
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