Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

I am the Poem

Swishing, swaying, this way and that, I swindle your perspective of anything my writer chooses. Creating images in your mind, bringing tears to your eyes, that’s my way of working. Your tears of gladness that come from the realization of a new perspective on something, the tears of sorrow for the sad pathetic person trudging on in their life.  Hope for a new day, hope for a new start, hope for new friends, for another art.

A contest entry

....comments?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Naridill
    October 15

    Edit | Reply
    I feel the repeats at end take a lot of imagery from this piece but apart from that, I nice and fluent piece of prose.