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Inside

Decietful lies
Laying down hearing my soul cry
holding so much pain inside
giving up on life
no one understand why
don't know why I try
so many thoughts in my mind
feels like a roller coaster ride
can you see the pain in my eyes?
my sadness i try to hide
faking a happy side
nothing but decietful lies

Author notes

I hate feeling like this

I'm just going through so much right now. Just let me know what you think

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