Pale girl swinging on her swing
Grass waving under her feat
Crying to the sound of birds
Broken heart,will never be mended
Singing is her only way of getting free
even that was taken away by him.
What did you think
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welcome to allpoetry
thanks for sharing this with us here and for joining the site, some times it can be so hard to get these emotions out, but well done,please keep up the writing,
cheers
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I like the third line.
you took something and contradicted the effect and it made a lasting impression.
I like the picture and feeling you painted with your words
~Torii
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