Pure eyes looked at me
My iced-heart melted
Your steps shook the world
The air around you burnt me
I shouldn’t have met you
But I did
I shouldn’t have let you go away
But I did and I still miss you
My footprints dig into the mud
My pain can’t be washed away
I’m slowly falling down
And writing your name with my blood
I shouldn’t have loved you
But I did
I shouldn’t have shown you how I feel
But I did and I still love you
I remember to the time
When your arms spun me around so strongly
And I remember my heart beat so fast when I was close to you
Old, ancient times
I shouldn’t have kissed you
I shouldn’t have touched you
I shouldn’t have been born alive
Knowing I will not be with you.
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pretty, pretty words.
this is so delicate, it is wonderful!
however, line 17: do you mean "spun"? --past tense of spin.
24 : "shouldn't have BEEN born alive"?
and 25: rephrase to something like 'Knowing [that] I will not be with you.' ?
yes, no, maybe.
an artists' work is their own, and its beauty shines through.
thank you for posting this so it could brighten my day
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THNX so MUCH!!!
Your comment is very useful!! THNX again
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