oh to blow away in the wind
like dandelion seeds
just to find a smile
...tada...
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If you want to share
I'm willing to hear
Speak to me, have no fear
Trust in me, hesitate never.
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Thanks for stopping by!
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Read it again. Liked it again.
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yay, second reads and still likes are always a good sign. smiles.
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Great word from a wise person."greatnees doesnt come through conformity but through reformation.Sometime in this life decandence is all around us. and Peoploe dont want to be different, so they choose the opposite route. But if you can hold on to your morality, or change for the better, it will be a struggle. Great write and take care.
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Thanks bro, I appreciate your comments. Hope you are well!
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A wistful poem of escape, to travel out of the present to a better place that welcomes you with a smile. Very well done, I can see the dandelion seeds floating away as the breeze catches them. Thank you for sharing.
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smiles, thank you, thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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Whimsical and light, but with a sense of purposeful wandering, or wondering, maybe both.
This poem is good like a good long walk on a cold and blustery day.
IC C
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smiles, thanks!
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interesting, and the first two lines are oh so pretty, but the relation between them and the last line and the title is ambiguous - to me
in any case the poem's a breeze and very nice - if a bit shattered - in the context of the end of summer
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Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it!
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Some of us are not made to blow away in the wind but must stand firm in the gale and watch things that are blown away. This is so wonderful . . . wistful indeed, and dreamy. Very well done.
Garrison
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ah so true. Thank you. smiles.
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Aw, I really like this one. It's cute and kinda wistful.
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wistful eh? yes I think you're right.
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