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Mommy Dear

Mommy dear, I need you so,
Mommy dear, please don't go.,
I need you here to lend a hand,
Mommy dear, please understand:

I'm lost with out you,
This I cannot bare,
Mommy dear, I need your care,

Mommy dear, I need your love,
I'm lost without the warmth of your hugs,
Mommy dear, please don't go,
Because mommy dear, I need you so.

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