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Paradise Lost (Wish You Were Here Again)

Across the desert sands
I watch a caravan
And dream it could take me to you
As the west wind blows
I shiver to my bones
And all I can think of is you

I still feel you here
The memory's so clear
So don't go forgetting me love
How we learned to be free
How we lived in our dreams
Now nothing's what it seems

Paradise lost is a place without you
In the shadow of love there's no room with a view
Walking along on the sand
Wish you were here again

And as the sun goes down
I head back into town
And see everything that we knew
And though I turn away
I can't forget your face
'Cos i'm always reminded of you

I still feel you here
Your memory's so clear
So don't got forgetting my love
How we lived in our dreams
How i'll never be free
Untill you come back to me

Do you remember
Lying here with me?
Do you remember
The way we used to be?

Paradise lost is a place without you
In the shadow of love there's no room with a view
Walking along on the sand
Wish you were here again

I wish you were here again

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  • Let.Love.In
    October 16

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    I loved how you ended your poem

    i also loved the story behind the poem and the fact that it brought back personal memories was something I thank you for

    beautiful write

    ~Torii