Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Little Girl

There's a little girl
with her head in her hands
crying at school
because nobody understands.

There's a broken spirit
who can't seem to find love
everyone looks right past her
she never rises above.

There's a lonely daughter
who's life has no joy
there's nothing anymore
that she seems to enjoy.

There's a shattered teen
singing herself to sleep
wrapped around in promises
no one seems to keep.

Author notes

this is about me.

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Roseamongweeds
    October 15
    Edit | Reply
    Wow. That's super powerful.

  • wow i love it. i especially love the last stanza it.


  • lilbabygurl88
    October 15

    Edit | Reply
    I know this feeling all too well.. I'm sure everyone at some point has felt this feeling. I enjoyed this piece, as it relates so well to life.

    ~D

  • luvhilton
    October 15
    Edit | Reply
    i how exactly i how you feel.

  • itis very good, strong emotions and i know the feeling!

1 - 5 of 5