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Nightmares

So many nights I cannot sleep
so many days I do not want to eat
a ghost of my former self
happiness and memories now sit on a shelf
that happy part of me has left again
leaving me in a body of unbearable sin
wanting so much to escape
a very poor example if this is fate
only able to smile at the worst times
making me commit the worst crimes
choosing my descions without my consent
my heart so froze it can no longer be bent
my tears have stopped flowing
but the blood is now showing
pacing back and forth all alone
my fears and worries now shown
no where to run
mind pleading for the rise of the sun
at the edge
clingling on the little ledge
just a little leap
or maybe the wound is a little too deep
time to start again
in this game that never ends

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  • luvhilton
    October 15

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    i like it alot. the visual stanzas in this is amaxing. and i knoe exactly wat this feels like.


  • xxEmoGirlxx17xx
    October 14
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    i like it

  • good job

    Background is good, , the truth within your words are beautiful and left me thinking and considering ideas .well done. Excellent very visual I love the story this poem tell.