H ere come the children,under cloak of night
A all is quiet and the air is thick
L etters of affirmation spread
L ittle children out to party
W allowing in the darkness, cheers rise.
E nding all the boredom
E nding all the strife
N ever forgetting, it is HALLOWEEN night.
Author notes
Prompt was the word halloween, reserved for the use of an acrostic, this is what I came up with.
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Thank you for your entry
This is a good acrostic, your words are well chosen and perfectly describe Halloween. The subtle rhyme works well
Prompt Development = 16/20
Organization = 15/20
Poetic Language & Imagery = 13/20
Use of Language = 12/20
Overall Impact = 15/20
Total = 71/100
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Shari
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Thank You for Your Entry ~
This is quite a good acrostic, I like the word use and imagery invoked especially how you you added 'Ending all the boredom' as we can all get bored in life
Prompt Development = 15/20
Organization = 16/20
Poetic Language & Imagery = 16/20
Use of Language = 16/20
Overall Impact = 16/20
Total = 79/100
Best of Luck
Stay safe
Manda
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