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My Saving Grace

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Amazing Grace... 

how sweet the sound!

Miss. Gracie Marae;

this soft touch 

of life given to our family...

I cannot wait until I see your sweet, little angelic face


I am thankful to God for you

You will be loved

and

you can always count on me;

your loving Grandma

 

I opened my heart to you

from the first moment Mommy told me you

were arriving;

a smile fixed upon my face



I long to hold you close and near

for

there's nothing more comforting
than a little girls' touch

 

I love you child; 

you're my amazing grace

 

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  • lovlilmystery
    November 17

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    I am not sure why, my comment is not showing up, in my contest as being submitted. At present, it only says I have viewed it, but as you can see, I did actually leave a comment. Thanks once again, for entering the contest. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


  • lovlilmystery
    November 7
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    Awwww, how sweet. I really think this is a lovely poem, just for your little granddaughter. I too, have written one for both my granddaughters. They are so precious a gift, from God. Thank you very much, for sharing this piece. Good luck in the contest. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


  • KatherineAnne
    October 23

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    Awww. A touching and honest piece you've written here (:
    An amazing write about an amazing topic. The beginning of life (:

    Thank you for sharing this write.
    Great job =)

    -Kati Anne


  • PrincessOfFire
    October 15

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    Wonderful tribute

    I bet she is. Grandchildren are the best. You can love them and send them home...lol Also their paybacks to every threat you made your children...lol the blessings are the best part, to get that chance in life to know what to expect and to do a much better job at it all. Also to know at the end of the day when they kiss you goodnight, no matter the handfull they were, they become our angels once again! Wonderful tribute to Gracie. Love her all you can. Rose
    BTW the background is lovely,


  • tomisb
    October 14

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    Nothing beats the sigh and sound of a doting grandma
    Love,
    Tom B.


  • Griswold silver member
    October 14

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    How very cute and loving, coming from a doting grandmother to be. This young lady will be spoiled rotten I bet by grandma. Well done and best of luck... Scott


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 14

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    Wow sis, the background is just perfect and so is the way you have this. You will be the best grandmother, and I am just excited for you. my sweet sister.

    Joann


  • Desire gold member
    October 14

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    Precious~

    Oh My ~ I Love his contests and have not seen it yet...
    I am so slow
    nor have I seen the titles but will make a presumption
    of what one of the choices are
    Woo Hoo~ You just go on and can't wait for her arrival~
    How exciting and I imagine You are just biting Your nails
    Excellente Sweet One
    The song gets me teary eyed but as it should~
    Keep that quill dancing
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice Beautiful
    Best wishes in the contest too~
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • penman gold member
    October 14

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    Excellent

    Aww, this is such a sweet and touching write. So very filled with love and well worded. Thank you for sharing from your heart. Best of luck in the contest

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