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Loner

They hate me
im an outsider
i can't take
the looks
the stares
the whispers
the rumors
the lies
I wish
they'ed accept me
for me
and let me be
i wish they knew
the burden i carry
so you could see
life through
my eyes
then and only then
you can judge me

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  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    October 14

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    Good

    Really good, not hard to read. a wonderful take on life. Enjoyable, I really enjoyed its thoughts this was excellent as well as creative and a very thought provoking poem