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A Word on Spirit

Raindrops
                          on
                                                  rooftops
                          our
beating
                            hearts
                                                    healing
                          a
dead
                            pulse
                                                      fed
                              with
mutual
                            energy
                                                      fuels
                          that
dove
                            sings
                                                    of
                            hope

Author notes

It's pattern reading. Find the form, follow it. Two poems here.

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  • Montey silver member
    October 14
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    Clever.What more can I say?Montey