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I Just Can't

Through simple things falling apart
  I'm simply undone without You. 
With the war waging in my breaking heart
  I'm alone and so untrue.

I just can't. That's my confession. 
I just simply can't. 
I just can't. That's my admission.
That is my heart's rant. 

I know I can't and that You can, 
  You want to, just through me.
I die inside to the great I AM.
Let me be completely free.

Wage the war that's ongoing.
I'll be here so weak. 
Living in You I'll be growing.
All You need is speak. 

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When I am weak, I am strong.

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  • Nice job. I liked this poem. It is a clear admission of your feelings. Very well done.

    Mike


    • M0ofi3
      October 16
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      Also...

      ...a clear admission of the truth...

      Thanks...


  • katie marie silver member
    October 14

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    Sometimes I think He gets a big smile on His face every time we come back around to this place of realizing that we are totally dependant on Him. He loves show himself as the All Sufficient One.

    • M0ofi3
      October 15
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      Such Realization...

      ...is, in essence, repentance.

      So yeah...He's jazzed...


  • Denerica silver member
    October 14

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    I mentioned that in a prayer to someone today on a prayer website I go on, and yes we may be weak but He is strong, He even knows what we would do, say and react, ever since we came in the flesh. Excellent. Blessings.

    • M0ofi3
      October 15
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      I believe the Lord made us weak for the sake of necessary dependence.


  • Warrior of Peace
    October 14
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    wow

    I love this poem.

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