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Moments That You Want To Last A Lifetime

Sometimes you think that you have no purpose,
and that your life is just flesh and bones.
Yet, no one tells what's worth more than anything.
Your heart, your love, something that can't just be given away.
So take your frown, and give that away to put a smile on.
There are things that you just can't get forget.
These are the reason you keep that smile, why you live.
Love is such a powerful thing, it makes me,
act like such a fool, this girl is my one love.
No matter who you are, you can find that one love.
Don't search, it'll come, and you can only wish it'd be sooner.
Love is a surprising thing, you can do so much more.
You haven't fully lived until you have loved.
So, don't cry over a breakup, it was only fate.
So here is to your destiny, to forever.
Keeping your hand reached out for that someone will,
grab your hand, and it'll be the best moment of your life.

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  • good job

    I enjoyed, this poem I like the imagery and the thoughts behind this piece I think it has a good message for others and I loved the realism There were no errors. Alexander QQ...