I drawn without water
I’m being smothered
without a pillow
hit without a fist
binded without ropes
I fall without gravity
I’m the queen of all my worlds
yet, I need a guardian
With fragile strength
that loves to dream
that holds me without touch
sees me without vision
hears me, without sound
get close without moving
understands me
without any explanation
Please tell me what you think
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Sis, this is amazing!!! I love the thought in this one!!! Simply stunning and amazing! You really show your amazing talent within this one! Great job!!
and love
Nyetta
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this is a very great read, very much emotion is flowing out to all who read, magnificent work my friend, keep at it!
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STUNNING!!!
Elmarie I love this one it is as usual an amazing write. such emotion it seeps into my pores and to my soul.My heart aches for you. if I could reach across the ocean, i would dry your tears and hold you dear friend till the fear and pain subsided. (hey that may be the start of a poem)
a million applause for this one.
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great work capturing your thoughts and wants in well thought out fashion.
nicely written.
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This is a wonderful read. You have set a deliberate attack on your own emotion and presented it with power and directness. Well done Sis!
Love,
Amera♥
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