Somewhere...
Lost in the nostalgia
between blues and grays,
you find yourself
running scared.
Somewhere...
Abandoned in the shadows like
Satans forgotten toy,
cast aside without
a second thought.
Somewhere...
Found but broken and alone.
You need to know,
that what is today, but
yesterdays tomorrow.
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picture credit
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titles in my bookmarks used;
Nostalgia
Satans Forgotten Toy
Running Scared
You Need To Know
Yesterdays Tomorrow
A contest entry
- Who Is She? by Heavenly Angel.
700 points, ended October 22, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Found but broken and alone.
You need to know,
that what is today but
yesterdays tomorrow.
Bro, I think you need an "is" between today and but in the third line here. Doesn't read properly without it. Other than that, this is beauty and loneliness wrapped in loving words. Excellent job.
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Thanks Sis..actually that line is supposed to read that way..
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but.... but.... :'( it's not proper English!!!!!!! :'(
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SHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
nobody knows
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Abandoned in the shadows like
Satans forgotten toy,
cast aside without
a second though.
This is my favourite stanza, but need a 't' at the end of thought..
Brilliant write though.
Good luck ...
J
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Thank you for the comment..and catching my typo..lol
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Very fine piece you have here!
Excellent!
Much enjoyed the depth of feeling; of emotion that I felt
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Thanks for the HM this was a fun contest.
Just to let you know the titles that I chose from out of my bookmarks can be found in my AN if you want to see them anyway.
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