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Comparative




Despite the exiled certitude
Composed of rigid fears
My Poetry’s still hesitant
To cite Love's knowing tears

As eyes despise with blackened silk
When colors sidle in
And Ether waves turn quickened tides
On vagueness wearing thin

Their downward cast cannot get past
To read between the shores
Of happiness and emptiness
So fate abstracted yours

But fell between divided minds
Of passion's frozen dew
Thus blurring lines with harsh regret
Distorting love I knew

And while I can’t envision
Calming waves of Clover Sea
Your intimate emotion
Still intrigues inside of me

Had sordid orbs of meaningless
Not sunk in oceans lost
I’d dare another universe
To dream as being crossed

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