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All I Ask

Laden with worthless thoughts
of bridges continuing to burn
past journies of endless dreams
and enveloped discontentment
where does my future rest
amongest these lonely endeavours
bridges have built walls
whilst one bother to climb my ladder of hell
break down these barriers
help me live a dream possesed
and give me a future to lean on
lend me an ear is all I ask......

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  • ZachP gold member
    November 5
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    Powerful,
    poignant,
    and vivid.

    This is an amazing poem
    that rests heavily on my heart.

    Well done~
    Zach Estell.


  • SEA angel gold member
    November 1

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    Hi Angel...

    Hi dear heart. I see you wrote this on my birthday. Someone was just thinking about you and praying blessings your way to our poetic online earth angel on AllPoetry, Haleigh Grace. GBU God Bless U cyber AP daughter gift from God.


  • SEA angel gold member
    October 18
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    YAY! Written on my birthday.

    Speech! Speech! "All I Ask" is everyone have a blessed every day. Let's pray on it.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 14

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    Very emotional and poignant; nicely done
    You conveyed a lot of thought within the lines of this piece
    Thank you for sharing and good luck to you!