The vast black emptiness cutting me inside
it suddenly surrounds us
as the blood begins to drown us-
and by the time you found us-
it was too late
times have changed
our lives re-arranged
and we were not listening to the whispers of fate
the coldness of the room
so eerily still and quiet
yet inside each of us
lays an internal riot
once upon a midnight dreary
lives were lost, shadows eerie
the fog and smoke consumed the fury-
the rage kept deep inside
and without hesitation, or warning, the lost souls died.
Author notes
the title says it all...i was asleep last night, and in my dream ii read this poem...i wrote it down as soon as i woke up.
Comments
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That's a pretty fucked up dream to have honestly, haha. I've had worse I can imagine. But the write is amazing, sounds like a very good poet wrote this, and you're the one it came to, maybe that might be something you would write but your self concious showed it to you through your state of mind when you're not thinking about anything else. Anyway, awesome write, wether it's yours or not. It's amazing. Keep up the good work!
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awesome write ^.^
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