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Eight To Five

The clocks are webs

And you are the fly
that buzzes too close.

And when you stare
Into the spider's eyes
You will understand

The truth
The answer
And the feeling

That you are forever stuck.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 15

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    This is really well done. I love the use of the comparison between spider and fly and being caught in a web that you can't quite escape.

    Poetically, punctuation is great for a poem

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    Good job, keep writing.