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Deem I Imitate My Savior

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Lord renew my spirit

Create my heart anew

May I live in oneness

That I might be an expression of you
 

Deem I imitate my Savior

life in your word may I breathe

A treasure never buried

A parchment of loving creeds

  

Be my song and inspiration

The meditations of my soul

A diary of emblems

A precious seed to sow

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • S.Hunt
    October 14

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    Yes, it does sound like a hymn to me as well. I like the way it flows so smoothly, and song-like. As I read, I feel my heart in agreement with the prayerful request the poem conveys. Thanks for sharing.


  • Barry Hodges
    October 14
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    Typos in last para:...
    1] imitate
    2] no hyphen in "unseen", I fear.

    This could be a hymn I do believe. All you need is a catchy tune.


  • Shadow Ronin
    October 14
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    This is beautiful! I always love poetry about God. I love it!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 14

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    Sincerity rings through the lines ...A call to dedication to our Lord and Savior...As always your faith chimes loudly for all who read to hear it..


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 14
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    Very nice, Sharon. I like it. Very well written with a wonderful message. God bless.

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