Emotions are just an illusion
You can block them out
It's only a state of mind
Afraid?
I'm not.
Love?
Who can?
Emotions are just using you
They are the strings that control your every move
And we are just along for the ride
Emotions cloud our better sense
And we just can't hide
A contest entry
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Comments
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I felt more punctuation would have directed this flow better but the content definitely reflects prompt well.
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It probably would have... but I was in a hurry and in class and I thought about it, but I just didn't know how I wanted to do it. So I left it as it be.
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L11 sense not sence.
And emotions blow bubbles up an elephants arthritic elbow for the most part. with wisdom comes control of them, and by that time it's too late. Best of luck to you... scott
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i like it
i sometimes feel the same way! i like thiz poem.
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