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the last drop of ash


once.mylifewas a fire
and as my last memory simmers
i am called a./worthless./liar
while the.lastmemory. still g.l.i.m.m.e.r.s


It's funny-- whenever I'm drunk I write about fire.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 15

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    This is gorgeous. I love the use of dirty pretty here.
    The rhyme is basic but perfectly suits.

    Welcome to Allpoetry
    I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask
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    Good job, keep writing.

  • LeavesofAutumn
    October 15
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    Wow

    I like this and how you used the whitespace space, it gave the piece more dimension and meaning.